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The Great Mouse Plot
I think this is what happened. Roald Dahl found the dead mouse outside the shop. Then they put it on top of the door. When Mrs Pratchett opened the door the dead mouse fell on her head. Then he did it again when she went out again... only this time with soapy water!
by Otis



Coraline by Daniella
Once there lived a girl called Coraline. She had just moved into a house on 44A Matai road. Her Mums name was Megan and her Dads name was Jack. Coraline found a door. Coraline  twisted the door handle but she couldn’t open the door. She quickly sneaked over to the key rack. She tried all of the keys but they didn’t fit so she looked in the drawer. She found a key. She tried it. “It fits,” Coraline said. She walked through the door. She kept on walking, then she found another house. 
Her Mum said, “Wake up.” Then when Coraline  looked at her Mum Coraline saw she had button eyes. Her Mum was acting like she was nice but she was actually mean. Then she walked back into her real house. 
Megan said, “Coraline where are you?” But she was in the other world. She was still walking through the door. Then she walked out into the kitchen in the real world. “Coraline! Coraline, where were you?” called Megan. Then they went to bed. 
Coraline took the keys again and went to the other world. The Mum said, “Come with me to the garden.” Then the Mum turned the Dad into a pumpkin. They went back into the house. The Mum took off her costume. There was an alien under the suit. 
“I WILL KILL YOU!” screamed the Mum. Coraline quickly went though the door and slammed it. The Mum was turning and turning but she couldn’t open it. Meanwhile, Coraline was still walking through the door. She quickly opened the door and came out. She put the key in the drawer. It was the middle the night . Then she fell asleep. They all lived happily ever after. 
THE END
The Princess and the Dragon by Emma Y

0nce upon a time there was a baby Princess. Her name was Angelena. Her Mum and Dad adored her. One day her mum and dad were kidnapped so her big brothers looked after her until she was older. One day she decided to ride her horse. Six minutes later she found a cave and decided to go in. But her mum and dad had ordered her to not go in but she still went in. She found her mum and dad and she rescued them. But just as she left the Dragon appeared. He was just about to eat them when he heard the sound of other dragons flying by. Then he flew in the opposite direction. They were saved and all lived happily ever after.
The End 


The King and the Devil by Jack B
Once there was a King called Liam. He has a crown, a cape, a gold sword and black amour. One day when King Liam was in his castle a Devil the size of a dog jumped through the back door window.


The Devil had big horns, was big and strong and good at fighting. No one saw him dive through the back door window because no one ever goes there. He slowly made his way through the castle to the Kings room.


One, two three go! The Devil jumped through the door and tackled King Liam. King Liam yelled for the guards but they didn’t come because the Devil had covered the King’s mouth with his hand.


He yelled again for his guards and luckily one of the guards was outside the door. The guard heard King Liam yelling and he ran into the room. The guard yelled for the other guards.


The guards sprinted into the room when the guards saw the Devil the guards got out there swords and with out hitting the King they chopped the Devils head right off.


King Liam thanked the guards and the devil was never to be seen again.


Daniella and Megan by Daniella

Once upon a time there lived a girl. Her name was Daniella. She loved to play destructive darts. Daniella had a friend called Megan.
Megan loved to make moth muffins. They got to play destructive darts while they had Megan’s moth muffins.
They went on the plane to England. Then they went to London airport to travel up to New York. They stayed two weeks in an apartment. Then they travelled back to London airport and back to New Zealand and they all lived happily ever after.